Saturday, October 13, 2012

Day 12. The Un-Edibles....

I love looking back and reading old things that I have written.

What I love better is looking back and seeing what people have helped me write.


This was written in a one hour time frame.
It was done by a former staffer and myself.

And I cannot help laugh each time I read it because it is so dang awesome...

When you read this go line by line...
 Don't look ahead, just enjoy each word that is in front of you.


The Un-edibles

Pain,

Suffering,

Illness.

The ground crowded,

Filled with vegetables.

Unable to move from the grasps of the destroyer.

Their voices are silent.

Their lifeline dwindling.

Their only savior doesn’t know what to do.

Asking question after question

Trying to find an answer to the disease killing those she worked so hard for.

She tries so hard to keep them alive,

Only to pull them from their warm homes.

She is their life.

She is their death.

She is Maria.
 
 
Now think about this... What if this wasn't about a disease, an illness, a plague destroying a country or a hospital or whatever you thought.. what if it was a garden... and "Maria" was a garden with a mold infestation  in her garden..... what then??? Would this story have a completely different outlook to it..
 
I think so.
 
 
Have a good night everyone.
 
Godspeed <3

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